Explanation about the new style in the redrafts!

I chose to totally redraft my magazine because I didn't like the originals. I liked small elements but I wouldn't have been comfortable handing the drafts in as a my final piece. I didn't feel they looked professional or like they could be sold on the shelf the next day so I subsequently decided to recreate a different cover, contents, and double page spread. I am much happier with the new versions and feel they follow more conventions and look more professional and are more in keeping with the modern conventions for music magazines. I have uploaded below the newly edited versions of my redrafted version and the main thing I changed on this was the tracking and leading to make sure my attention to detail was consistent in order to produce the best media product I can.