Feedback: Charlotte, this is an excellent idea - well done.
Feedback for images: The images you have taken so far are good and I like the fact that you have changed the colour levels and documented this. The only thing at the moment that will stop you hitting the higher marks for images is the lack of variation in the models. You have used the same 3 girls quite a lot and across many of the pages. For the highest marks, you will need to show a variation in shot type (angles and composition) and shoot a range of genders/ages. Again, if you can get live shots, that would be good. You have clearly given thought to how you want the images to look though, so they certainly get a thumbs up for being consciously constructed rather than "snaps".
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ReplyDeleteCharlotte, this is an excellent idea - well done.
Feedback for images:
The images you have taken so far are good and I like the fact that you have changed the colour levels and documented this. The only thing at the moment that will stop you hitting the higher marks for images is the lack of variation in the models. You have used the same 3 girls quite a lot and across many of the pages. For the highest marks, you will need to show a variation in shot type (angles and composition) and shoot a range of genders/ages. Again, if you can get live shots, that would be good. You have clearly given thought to how you want the images to look though, so they certainly get a thumbs up for being consciously constructed rather than "snaps".